ups and downs of writing

I Forgot

Written by Susan Noyes Anderson on . Posted in Children's Poems

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I wrote a good story but something went wrong.
I had all the characters where they belong.
The setting was great, and the word use was strong.
The length was just right … not too short, not too long.

I checked everything. I indented a lot.
I spelled all the words just the way I was taught.
I wrote a good story, but my teacher thought
it had one major weakness––I left out the plot.

If you liked this poem, you might enjoy reading Come Into My Parlor.

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Susan Noyes Anderson

Susan Noyes Anderson is the author of At the End of Your Rope, There’s Hope, Deseret Book, ©1997; Awaken Your Spiritual Power: The Fairy Godmother Isn’t Coming!, Karisma Press, ©1999; and His Children (poetry only, photos are by Anita Schiller), Vantage Point Press, ©2003.

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